Fragmented Medical Records Delayed Treatment for Months

My whole family got our health records stolen through a data breach a few years back. Since then, I've been obsessed with the problem of fragmented health data. Plus, my uncle traveled to Turkey for alcoholism treatment. It took MONTHS to get started because his medical records were scattered across different hospitals and systems. Doctors couldn't access his full history, which delayed care when he needed it most. I got really pissed off and when I went down the rabbit whole of research, turns out this problem was freaking common. They sell our data, it get hacked, it's hard to access and practically use it in any way without consent from us and on top of that researchers get affected too. All because of these institutions and big pharma. And i know the current adminitration announced having all of our health records in one place but that hard to trust. SO I decided to create a way we can all have our records in one encrypted vault and when someone(doctors, researchers and sport labs) request access, you can license access and get incentivized by doing so.On top of that you also control and own it.

Please tell how I can improve this, if you have any questions and wether or not it resonates.